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Feedback should be qualitative and actionable: that is,Feedback should be qualitative and actionable: that is, a writer must be able to do something about what you say.
So, not: “I don’t know, I just don’t like this kind of story.”
Instead: “I found the plot confusing in that I don’t know why Jamie does what he does. I think if the dialog between Jamie and Bella was longer, or if Pierre showed up earlier, I would understand what was happening.”
Never: “The description sucks”
Instead: “I think the image on page three doesn’t keep the tone consistent. If we are supposed to be nervous about Miguel’s hand, saying it ‘jumped like a monkey’ seems too cute. Maybe ‘scrunched like a spider’ or some other, creepier animal, to make us feel the anxiety more?”
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